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篇一:请根据下面的提示,写一张有关举行英语演讲比赛(contest)的海报,

一、整体解读

试卷紧扣教材和考试说明,从考生熟悉的基础知识入手,多角度、多层次地考查了学生的数学理性思维能力及对数学本质的理解能力,立足基础,先易后难,难易适中,强调应用,不偏不怪,达到了“考基础、考能力、考素质”的目标。试卷所涉及的知识内容都在考试大纲的范围内,几乎覆盖了高中所学知识的全部重要内容,体现了“重点知识重点考查”的原则。

1.回归教材,注重基础

试卷遵循了考查基础知识为主体的原则,尤其是考试说明中的大部分知识点均有涉及,其中应用题与抗战胜利70周年为背景,把爱国主义教育渗透到试题当中,使学生感受到了数学的育才价值,所有这些题目的设计都回归教材和中学教学实际,操作性强。

2.适当设置题目难度与区分度

选择题第12题和填空题第16题以及解答题的第21题,都是综合性问题,难度较大,学生不仅要有较强的分析问题和解决问题的能力,以及扎实深厚的数学基本功,而且还要掌握必须的数学思想与方法,否则在有限的时间内,很难完成。

3.布局合理,考查全面,着重数学方法和数学思想的考察

在选择题,填空题,解答题和三选一问题中,试卷均对高中数学中的重点内容进行了反复考查。包括函数,三角函数,数列、立体几何、概率统计、解析几何、导数等几大版块问题。这些问题都是以知识为载体,立意于能力,让数学思想方法和数学思维方式贯穿于整个试题的解答过程之中。

篇二:小学生英语演讲稿100字左右

小学生英语演讲稿各种主题范文

dear teacher and classmates:

i am very glad to make a speech here in this class again! this time, i\d like to talk something about english.

when i was seven, my mother sent me to an english school. at there, i played games and sang english songs with other children . then i discovered the beauty of the language, and began my colorful dream in the english world.

everyday, i read english following the tapes. sometimes, i watch english cartoons.

on the weekend, i often go to the english corner. by talking with different people there, i have made more and more friends as well as improved my oral english.i hope i can travel around the world someday. i want to go to america to visit washington monument, because the president washington is my idol. of course, i want to go to london too, because england is where english language developed. if i can ride my bike in cambridge university, i will be very happy.

i hope i can speak english with everyone in the world. i\ll introduce china to them, such as the great wall, the forbidden city and anshan.

i know, rome was not built in a day. i believe that after continuous hard study, one day i can speak english very well.

if you want to be loved, you should learn to love and be lovable. so i believe as i love english everyday , it will love me too.

我喜欢英语 亲爱的老师,同学们: 我很高兴可以在这个课堂上做一次演讲.这一次,我想谈谈英语.我的话题是我爱英语.正如每个人所知,英语在今天十分重要.它已经被应用到世界的各个角落.它已经成为商业上最为通用的一门语言并广泛的用于国际贸易.如果我们能说好英语,我们就有更多的机会成功.因为越来越多的人注意到这一点,学英语的人数正在已很高的速度增长.但是对我而言,我学英语不仅仅因为它的重要性以及它的实用性,更是因为我喜爱英语.当我学英语时,我可以体会到一种不同的思维方式,它可以给我更多接触世界的空间.当我读英语小说时,我能感受到不同于阅读翻译文的快乐.当我说英语时,我可以感到自信.当我写英语时,我能够感到不同于汉语的那种美??我爱英语,它给了我一个色彩斑斓的梦.我希望有朝一日我可以畅游世界,用我流利的英语,我可以和世界各地的人交友.我能看到许多的名胜.我希望我能够到伦敦去,因为那里是英语的故乡.我也希望用我流利的英语来将我们的名胜介绍给说英语的朋友,我希望他们可以像我们一样的爱我们的国家.我知道,罗马不是一天筑成的、(成功需要日积月累.)我相信在持续不断的努力学习下,总有一天我可以拥有一口流利的英语.如果你想被爱,你就应该学着去爱他人.所以我相信我对英语的爱定将换来它对我的爱.我相信总有一天我会实现我的梦!谢谢!i am chinese

ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls,

i am chinese. i am proud of being a chinese with five thousand years of civilization behind. ive learned about the four great inventions made by our forefathers. ive learned about the great wall and the yangtze river. ive learned about zhang heng( 张衡 )and ive learned about zheng he( 郑和 ) . who says the yellow river civilization has vanished( 消失 ) ? i know that my ancestors have made miracles( 奇迹 )on this fertile land and were still making miracles.

who can ignore the fact that we have established ourselves as a great state in

the world, that we have devised our own nuclear weapons, that we have successfully sent our satellites into space, and that our gnp ranks no. 7 in the world? we have experienced the plunders ( 掠夺 ) by other nations, and we have experienced the war. yet, based on such ruins, there still stands our nation----china, unyielding and unconquerable!

i once came across an american tourist. she said, “china has a history of five thousand years, but the us only has a history of 200 years. five thousand years ago, china took the lead in the world, and now it is the us that is leading.”my heart was deeply touched by these words. it is true that were still a developing nation, but it doesnt mean that we can despise ( 鄙视 ) ourselves. we have such a long-standing history, we have such abundant resources, we have such intelligent and diligent people, and we have enough to be proud of. we have reasons to say proudly : we are sure to take the lead in the world in the future again, for our problems are big, but our ambition ( 雄心 ) is even bigger, our challenges ( 挑战 ) are great, but our will is even greater.

i am chinese. i have inherited ( 继承 ) black hair and black eyes. i have inherited the virtues of my ancestors. i have also taken over responsibility. i am sure, that wherever i go, whatever i do, i shall never forget that i am chinese!

i love you, china

good morning, ladies and gentlemen, i’m very glad to make a speech here. today my topic is “i love you, china.”

since the day i was born, i began to have a proud name—chinese. since the day i began to talk, the most beautiful sentence i’ve ever learnt has been “i love you, china!”

i love you, china, and i’m so proud of being a chinese. i’m proud that i’ve got the beautiful yellow skin, black eyes and black hair. i’m also proud that i speak the most beautiful language in the world—chinese.

i love you, china, for i can feel the deep love you give me every day, every minute. last year, i got an opportunity to visit the united states of america. during my staying there, my father’s boss once invited my family to dinner. while at table, he looked at me and asked: “little boy, how long have you been in america?” “about a month,” i answered, “how lucky you are!” he said, “if you were living in china, how could you learn such perfect english?” i smiled and told him proudly that all the students in china are able to learn english at school. i saw his surprised eyes and said to myself, “i’m proud of you, china. for you are offering us the best education.”

i love you, china. as a young student, all we should do is to study hard and devote ourselves whole-heartedly in the future, to the great cause of building you into an even stronger and greater country in the world. i love you, my dear motherland! i love you, china!

thank you for your listening !

i love english

when i was seven, i started learning english. i played games and sang english songs with other children. sometimes, i watched english cartoons. its funny. then

i discovered the

英语演讲稿范文初中100字

beauty of the

language, and began my colorful dream in the english world.

i hope i can travel around the world someday. i want to go to america to visit washington, because my cousin is over there. of course, i want to go to london too, because england is where english language developed. if i can ride my bike in cambridge university, i will be very happy. i hope i can speak english with everyone in the world. also ill introduce china to them, such as the great wall, and the gardens in suzhou. i will teaching people of the world about the beautiful language of our country.

我爱英语当我 7 岁,我开始学习英语。我打游戏,唱英语歌曲,与其他儿童。有时候,我看着英文漫画。这很有趣。接着我发现美丽的语言,并开始我的梦想在丰富多彩的英语世界。我希望我能在世界各地旅行一天。我想赴美访问华盛顿,因为我的表哥在那边。当然,我要到伦敦太多,因为英国是英语的发展。如果我能坐我的自行车在剑桥大学,我将非常高兴。我希望我能讲英语和大家在世界上。还我会向他们介绍中国,如长城,并在苏州的园林。我会教人的世界的美丽语言我国。我喜欢英语。学习英语是太好了。我曾经想成为一名英语教师。我也喜欢文学。当我真的很年轻,我能记住大量的诗歌。我也想成为一名教师的汉语。现在我认为,我的梦想都可以成真:我将能够使用英语教外国朋友汉语和中华文化的共享与他们。因此,越来越多的人们将能够了解五千年的历史文化,繁荣我们的伟大的中国。我的未来不是梦。我相信,这将成为现实

it’s a fine day today.

i stare at the smart girl in the mirror for a long time. “i can do it well.” i give myself a sweet smile. i’m a guide for my hometown, lishui. i’m very happy.i check my bag again to make sure that everything are there .yes, i get them all??there’s a camera in it. it can take down all beautiful scenery of lishui. and the beauty of friendship between our citizens and guests.

thank you!

i like sports

good morning, everyone!

i will talk about sports. i am an active boy. i like many kinds of sports, such as walking, skating, climbing, cycling and skipping. doing sports gives me a good health and brings me a lot of fun.

now, i will tell you about my cycling sport. i often ride my bicycle when i am free. i like to ride my bicycle on a road near my house. it is an empty road. there are no cars and few people walking on the road. it is about four kilometers long. it has several long slopes. so it is very good for cycling. when i ride down the slopes, the bicycle runs very fast, and i feel i am flying. that’s a very good feeling for me. when i ride up the slopes, it is very difficult, but it is a good training for me. i always try my best to ride up as long as possible. cycling there gives me lots of fun.

everyone can get ill, but doing sports is a good doctor. i know an english saying “exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.” my own story has proved it. i once had an illness. i had to go to see the doctors and take medicines very often. after doing sports for several years, i have recovered now.

doing sports gives me a strong body and brings me lots of fun. so if you want

to be strong, please do sports; if you want to enjoy a happy life, please do sports, too.

thank you

i have a busy father and a kind mother.

my father is a businessman. he is 42 years old. he is short. he likes reading newspapers after meals. he watches tv in the evening. he goes to work by car. he has got a nice black car. he often plays golf with his friends on the weekend. he does not often eat dinner with us.

my mother is a housewife. she doesn’t work. she stays at home. she is beautiful. she has long hair. she does housework in the morning. she often goes shopping in the afternoon. she is kind, but she is strict to my study. she likes reading. she watches tv at night, too.

i love my parents. and they love me too. i have many friends in my class. theyre lovely and interesting. i would like to introduce some of them. alice is very cute. shes also kind to everyone and shes very enthusiastic. shes always ready to help everyone, but she is forgetful. she always forgets to bring her textbooks, but our teachers always forgive her. ben is the most talkative boy in our class. his nickname is “chatterbox.” he has a great sense of humor and he always makes me laugh. linda is a quiet student. she is good at every subject but she never shows off. allen is a very tall boy. he plays basketball very well and he is on our school team. he often says, “playing basketball is good for your health. how about your classmates? do you like them? try to admire your classmates. you will be happier.

1. 学生两分钟英语演讲稿

good morning everyone, today is my turn to the speech. first of all, i would like to say that a quick test, we hope that the good preparation, good test for all, is the only way home for a good year. my english is not high, i wish i could within the next two years to learn english well. i hope you will be able to learn english after graduation to have a good future. finally, i wish the students and teachers a happy new year, further study and work. well! i finished the speech. thank you for listening 。大家早上好,今天是轮到我讲话。首先,我要说的是,快速测试,我们希望很好的准备,良好的测试的所有,是唯一回家的路上有一个良好的一年。我的英语水平不高,我希望我能 在未来两年内学好英语。我希望,你将能够学习英语毕业后有一个美好的未来。最后,我祝愿学生和教师的快乐新的一年里,进一步研究和工作。好 ! 我完成了讲话。谢谢你听。

2. 英语两分钟自我介绍演讲稿

hello,everyone!

today i am very happy,because i can talk about with you.you see i am

my dear friend let us start from the trivial side,to be a good kid keeper.

3. 小学英语 3 分钟演讲稿

my favourite super star is jj , he has a lovely dimple and his eyes are also very lovely . now let me tell you the story about jj .

he enterde the music indestry at the year 2004 , before that year ,he was only a boy who wrote songs for many super stars ,his songs were liked by many people but no one care who was the writer . he was noly hard to write songs because he like music ,he thought music has it soal , if you sing it by heart , it well be lived .

now he is not rather a shy singer and performer , the lyrical songs make him mature ,and now he is a man or not a boy .

he is a real super star with many fans ,the improve mark a big step forward confident .

4. i love english 我喜欢英语

i love english

my honorable teachers , my beloved schoolmates.good morning everyone ,but for myself,i learn english not only because of its importance and its usefulness,but also because of my love for it.when i learn english, i can feel a different way of thinking which gives me more room to touch the world.when i read english novels,i can feel the pleasure from the book which is different from reading the translation.when i speak english, i can feel the confident from my words.when i write english,i can see the beauty which is not the same as our chinese... i love english,it gives me a colorful dream.i hope i can travel around the world one day. with my good english, i can make friends with many people from different contries.i can see many places of great intrests.i dream that i can go to london,because it is the birth place of篇二:小学生英文演讲稿

i love you , china

good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

i’m very glad to make a speech here .today my topic is “i love you , china”. since the day i was born .i began to have a proud name---chinese. since the day i began to talk the most beautiful sentence i’ve ever learnt has been “i love you ,china !” i love you .china and i’m so proud of being a chinese . i’m proud that i’ve got the beautiful yellow skin , black eyes and black hair. i’m also proud that i speak the most beautiful language is the world ----chinese.

i love you , china . i am proud of being a chinese with five thousand years of civilization behind .i’ve learned about the four great inventions made by our forefathers . i’ve learned about the great wall and the chang jiang river . i’ve learned about zhang heng and i’ve learned zheng he.

i love you , china . as a young student , all we should do is to study hard and devote ourselves whole –heartedly in the future , to the great cause of building you into an even stronger and greater country in the world . i love you , china ! thank you for your listening!篇三:精选小学生英语演讲稿6篇下载[1]

1.学生两分钟英语演讲稿

good morning everyone, today is my turn to the speech. first of all, i would like to say that a quick test, we hope that the good preparation, good test for all, is the only way home for a good year. my english is not high, i wish i could within the next two years to learn english well. i hope you will be able to learn english after graduation to have a good future. finally, i wish the students and teachers a happy new year, further study and work. well! i finished the speech. thank you for listening。大家早上好,今天是轮到我讲话。首先,我要说的是,快速测试,我们希望很好的准备,良好的测试的所有,是唯一回家的路上有一个良好的一年。我的英语水平不高,我希望我能在未来两年内学好英语。我希望,你将能够学习英语毕业后有一个美好的未来。最后,我祝愿学生和教师的快乐新的一年里,进一步研究和工作。好!我完成了讲话。谢谢你听。

篇三:初中作文技巧

抓住切入点

对同一个话题,切入点不同,文章的选材、结构、立意等呈现形式定会多种多样。如果在作文构思时找到一个很好的切入口,就为能写出一篇好文章奠定了基础。那么,如何选准这个切入点呢?

一、从“点”上切入,大处着眼,小处着笔

作文话题往往比较宽泛,开放性强,限制少,题目大,范围广,可写的人、事、物、理很多。面对这类话题,学生往往难以把握,思绪难以集中,容易失去方向,无法驾驭,最好的办法是“化大为小”,从“小”处切入,写自己感受最深的一个小方面,表达独到的见解。如话题作文“和谐”,可写的层面很多,要尽可能收缩到一个“小”层面,或写班级的和谐,或述母子的和谐,甚至让笔墨更集中,专写沟通,迈出了和谐的第一步,使主题更鲜明。

话题的限制少,给人的思考空间大。但实际写作时我们必须对话题加以限制,通过细化话题,即缩小入题的范围和角度,化多为少,化大为小,化粗为细,宽题窄做,最终确定文意的取向。

否则,切入口径过大,主题就难以收拢。如以“父辈”为话题,就可以在前面加修饰语,在后面加中心词,也可以前后同时加,这样话题范围就缩小了。如:艰难的父辈、辉煌的父辈、父辈的悲伤、父辈的期望等。

话题缩小了,思路容易集中,避免在材料、立意等方面与别人的文章雷同。又如深圳中考作文“楼”,可写楼的历史,我家的新楼房,登楼,望楼兴叹,宿舍楼里的故事等等,打开思路就迅速了。

只有“以小见大”,才能避免信马由缰、言不及义,才有利于写出个性和特点。作文时找准紧扣“话题”的切入点,角度小,立意新,挖掘深,笔力集中,既方便于迅速构思成文,又不至于“下笔千言,言不及义”。这是成就一篇好文章的首要条件。

二、从材料的创新切入

选入作文的材料内涵往往是丰富的,理解角度是多样的,如何旧材料新用,就要运用一些技巧,或从小处着笔,或从特定的情景,或就某一句话,或就某一个细节,抓住有力的突破口,开口小,挖掘深。

作文发展等级要求“有创新,见解新颖,材料新鲜”,除了在思维上求新求深,还要重视对材料选好切入点,力求在平常的材料中求“新”,求“深”。

“遭遇挫折与放大痛苦”这一话题用来写作的材料来源应该很广泛,容易选取,但又易雷同。在同样条件下,作文水平的高低可能就体现在选用材料、分析材料的切入口上。 例如优秀作文《那时花开》片断:

我们总听到这样的话,“那时太痛苦了”,“那会儿我被气昏了头”,“那时真是生不如死啊!”??

凡此种种,无不提及“那时”,那时就真那么可怕吗?挫折面前,难道我们只有选择“放大痛苦”这一条路吗?

“那时”,李白不受朝廷重用,他决无灰心丧气之举,一吟便是“安能摧眉折腰事权贵”的豪迈!

“那时”,陶潜看不惯官场腐败,百官勾结,百姓遭殃,他决无低沉自贱之话,一唱就是“不为五斗米折腰”的义气!

“那时”,居里夫人身患血癌,她决无自暴自弃的举动,一开口就是“成功路上不是用

泪水而是用鲜血铸成”的坚韧!

“那时”?

这篇考场作文的独到之处,就是作者紧紧抓住“那时”这个切入点,即“挫折降临时”来作文章。一般考生可能都会用到居里夫人、李白这个事例,但往往开口大,泛泛而论。这位考生高人之处就是抓住材料中遭遇挫折时特定时刻的“那时”来挖掘,这富有包蕴的时刻,最有表现力,这切口确能入木三分。

命题作文的审题

教学目标:

1、 指导学生学会命题作文的审题,理解命题意图。

2、 在审题的基础上,引导学生多角度考虑问题,扩大写作题材;

教学重点、难点:

指导学生准确领悟命题作文的要点,把握命题作文的写法

一、命题作文应对策略

1、 揣摩题目中的暗示

题目中的暗示包含中心的暗示、选材的暗示、基本内容的暗示、重点的暗示。

例1 “在尝试中成长”

分析:

(1)中心的暗示: “成长”是本文着力表现的中心。“成长”一词理解是否到位直接关系到文章中心是否偏离。即精神、能力、智慧等的积极地变化;

(2)选材的暗示:“尝试”是突破口,什么尝试?什么叫尝试?回到了这个问题,就知道了写作的材料是可以很广泛的:精神上,某个方面的第一次感悟;生活里,某一个事件的第一次经历、第一次尝试;学习上,第一次的突破??可以说,选材上是特别广泛的

(3)基本内容的暗示:尝试了什么,获得了怎样的成长,提升了什么能力,感悟到了什么样的情感,谁在尝试?这些在文题中都有暗示。必须是自己的、积极地尝试,内容上要求必须是积极向上的。

(4)重点的暗示:“在尝试中”规定了写作的重点应该是尝试,事件应当具体,“成长”是一个变化的过程,不是顿悟,强调写作的过程中应该侧重自己精神、情感等方面的变化,写出变化,所以, “尝试”和“变化”应该是这次作文的重点。也就是说在写作过程中,事件的每个发展阶段中应该有“成长”体现其中;

例2“因你而精彩”

分析:

(1)中心的暗示:对“你”的赞颂;

(2)选材的暗示:“你”是突破口,古今中外、人事物情、琴棋书画、花鸟鱼虫??只要能给我们带来精彩的均可入围;

(3)基本内容的暗示:你是谁或什么,你怎么了或者说你有什么不寻常处,带来了怎样的精彩、感悟。

(4)重点的暗示:你怎么了或者说你有什么不寻常之处,带来了怎样的精彩,这才是文章中写作的重点,这一点写好了,文章也就成功了。

练习

【2011陕西】想看见你的美

试着从四个暗示的角度分析,看写作的重点在哪里。(谁?想看见?你?笑?)

2、 审清文题中的修饰语

题目中有一些修饰语,对作文有具体的要求,这也需要我们在审题的时候加以注意 例“可喜的变化”

分析:文题中“可喜”二字对 “变化”起了限制的作用。其实,“变化”有两种,既有好的变化,也有坏的变化,此文修饰语规定了必须写好的变化。文中还要用富有表现力的材料写出变化的具体内容,并重点写变化后的情景,对比中强调后者,才能突出“可喜”之处。另外,文章还应有适当的议论,以便点出“可喜”的深刻内涵。

练习(二选一)

(2011·上海市)命题作文:悄悄地提醒

要求:(1)写一篇600字左右的文章。(2)不得透露个人相关信息。(3)不得抄袭。

写一篇文章。 (2011·浙江台州*)以“身后的目光”为题目..

要求:①文体自选,诗歌除外;②字数不少于600字; ③文中不能出现含有个人信息的地名、校名和人名等。

3、审清题目的限定词

在一些中考命题作文中,会出现一些限定词,但是在写作中很多人不注意,往往会导致作文写作的过程中出现偏差。

例1“那是一首诗”(2011·广东佛山)“每天都是一首诗”

分析:

“一首”点明文章中应该是一个事件或者说是一个彼此有联系,能够和在一起的事件,决不能在写作的过程中写成几个片段,只照应主题,缺乏联系,导致变成那是“几首诗”。

例2“在我的世界里,一切都很美好”

分析:

“一切”很容易被忽略掉,那么什么是 “一切”呢?怎样表现“一切”呢?至少应该是两个或两个以上的方面才能被称为“一切”,比如学习和生活,比如学校、家庭、社会,比如物质和精神??

练习(2011·江苏南通)

题目:那一刻,我的世界春暖花开

要求:①文体自选。②文章不少于600字(诗歌不少于16行)。③文中不要出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。

4、审清题目前面的引导词

命题作文前的引导词是什么?为什么要有引导词?其实,引导词是对命题作文题目的进一步说明,是为了降低命题的难度或者规定命题的范围所采用的一种启发学生习作思路的方式,因此,审清引导词,然后和自己所审题所发现的信息互相印证,就能知道,命题作文该

写些什么。

例1:第一次月考作文引导词

在成长的路上,尝试是人生的必修课。比如:尝试着举手发言,尝试着参加竞赛,尝试着克服困难,尝试着宽容待人……每一次尝试不一定都成功,但一定会有收获。在尝试中,我们的智慧得到了增长,能力得到了提升,人性得到了升华。勇敢尝试吧,让我们在尝试中成长!

请结合自己的生活和体验,以“在尝试中成长”为题写一篇作文

分析:

“尝试着举手发言,尝试着参加竞赛,尝试着克服困难,尝试着宽容待人??”显然是告诉了我们写作选材,“在尝试中,我们的智慧得到了增长,能力得到了提升,人性得到了升华”显然是告诉写作的中心,这样看来,与我们在第一项审题时是一致的。

练习(2011·天津市)

同学们,回首你的初中生活,一定会有一些值得怀念的往事,难以忘却的身影,记忆犹新的画面,如同闪亮的星子(星星),将你记忆的夜空点燃得璀璨而美丽,那星子,或许是父母的关爱,师长的教诲,同伴的友情;或许是拼搏的汗水,成功的欢悦,自信的笑颜;或许是懊悔的泪光,成长的烦恼,青春的思索……那星子虽然已经在夜空滑过,但它所闪耀的光辉却会永远与你相伴。请选取其中最明亮的,来铭记你的初中时代吧!

题目:如星子滑过夜空

要求:(1)写一篇不少于600字的文章;(2)内容具体,有真情实感;(3)文体不限(诗歌、戏剧除外);(4)文中请回避与你相关的人名、校名、地名等。

二、命题作文写作示例

岁月如画,生活如诗。在我们人生的道路上,有许多感人至深的诗篇,请撷取你感受最深的一节去尽情描绘,用心抒写。

题目:那是一首诗

审题:

①“诗”是让人感受温馨的显示卡,由文题中的“诗”字,我们可以确定,要写的内容一定是给我们以欣喜、感动、美好之类的东西,留在我们心底的一定是最深刻、最感人,且愈久愈香的记忆。引导词中“在我们人生的道路上,有许多感人至深的诗篇”也暗示了这一点。唯一需要做的,就是将“那”具体化。

②题目前的引导语既印证了我们的想法,又拓宽了我们的思路。它具体而又明确地告诉我们写作的内容,“岁月”“生活”,可以是某个时间,也可以是某一类生活,还可以是我们人生路上感受最深的一件事(“感人至深的诗篇”)。

确定写作内容:

我们在动笔前,最关键的就是给 “那”确定一个具体的指代内容,可以从以下几个方面考虑:

①指代时间。如“童年”“初三”“春天”“夏夜”等等

②指代地点。如“故乡”“349宿舍”“清晨的校园”“晚自习时的教室”等等

③指代人物。如“父爱”“奶奶的唠叨”“师恩”“友情”等等

④指代景物。如“那片草地”“那微黄的灯光”“那孤独的树”等等

⑤指代其他事物、事件等。如“名著”“活动”“精神”等等

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巧妙组织结构:

①用小标题结构全文。如写“大自然是一首诗”时,就可以用四季的色彩来拟小标题:绿色序曲、红色乐章、黄色乐章、白色乐章,从而展现大自然的美丽。

②用课本剧结构全文。如写“349宿舍是一首诗”时,就可以运用剧本的形式组织结构,幕启、寝室成员陆续登场、落幕,还可以设计话外音等,从而展现当代中学生的风采。

③用诗的结构组织全文。如写“初三是一首诗”时,就可以如此组合镜头:序——酸,

第一节——苦,第二节——辣,尾声——甜。以此表现“我”对初三生活的感悟:刚进入初三,感到生活异样,接着尝到紧张之苦,临近中考感到竞争的火辣,中考揭晓感到收获的甜蜜。

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其实,组织结构的方法有很多,只要我们敢于创新,就一定能写出美文佳作来。 确定写作手法和写作详略:

写作手法有很多种,但是一个总的原则是:内容单调了,“我”就变。比如,如果写“那片草地”,景物单一,但我可以变化时间、变化心情、变化视角去观察去描写。比如,事件如果太平常了,就变化自己的叙述方式,变顺叙为倒叙,运用其他一些写作上的技法去让平地起波澜。这样,作文才会真正做到“文似看山不喜平”,让文章具有强大吸引力的感染力。

至于详略的安排,那就是看审题中题目强调的重点是什么了。此处不再赘述。

三、指导学生审题和写作

作文题目(改编自2011年湖北高考作文)

“旧”在《现代汉语词典》中的解释是:①过去的,过时的(跟“新”相对):~时代②因经过长时间或经过使用而变色或变形的(跟“新”相对):~书③曾经有过的;以前的:张家口是~察哈尔省省会④老交情;老朋友:怀~

【旧书】①破旧的书②古书

请你以“旧书”为题,写一篇作文。

要求:1)立意自定;

2)文体自选;

3)字数不少于600字。

提示:可以围绕“旧书”展开叙述,讲关于旧书的故事,也可以围绕它写自己的心路历程,从“旧”的释义上入手,选择一个突破口。

附:陕西新课改以来历年中考作文题

2006年

请从下面两个作文题中任选一个,写一篇作文(45分)

要求:①有真情实感,中心明确,语言通顺,表达力求有创意

②文体不限,不少于600字。若写成诗歌不少于20行

③凡涉及人名、校名、地名一律用英文大写字母A、B、C??代替

(一)、命题作文

题目:和你在一起

(二)、话题作文

人总要仰望点什么,一轮红日,一弯新月,一座山峰,甚至一种精神……只要能激起你心底的波澜,哪怕是激起一丝涟漪。当你仰望时,一股庄严神圣的力量,一个崇高伟大的形象,还有那难以磨灭的记忆就会从心底涌起……

请以“仰望”为话题,写一篇文章

2007年

请从下面两个作文题中任选一个,写一篇作文(45分)

要求:①有真情实感,中心明确,语言通顺,表达力求有创意

②文体自选,不少于600字。若写成诗歌则不少于20行

③凡涉及人名、校名、地名一律用英文大写字母A、B、C??代替

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