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篇一:英语演讲的那些套话

英语演讲的那些套话

登台演讲哪些套话值得一学?今天我们来说说演讲中的一些固定句型,会议发言、台前讲话,你一定用得上!

1. I appreciate… 我感谢……

I really appreciate your making time in your schedules to attend today.我非常感谢你们今天抽空来参加这个会议。

2.Thank you for… 感谢您……

Thank you for giving me this opportunity to speak about myself in this special occasion.

感谢您给我这个机会在这个特别的场合介绍我自己。

3. It is/was my honor… 我很荣幸……

It is my honor to introduce the president of our company, Mr. Jones.我很荣幸介绍我们公司总裁琼斯先生。

4. On behalf of… 代表……

On behalf of our entire company, I want to thank you for inviting us to such an enjoyable Christmas party.

我代表全公司,我想感谢您邀请我们参加这样一个令人愉快的圣诞晚会。

5. I’d be happy to…我很高兴……

I’d be happy to tell you about my experiences.

我很高兴和你们分享我的经验。

6. What I am going to talk about today is… 今天我想讲的是……

What I am going to talk about today is the energy conservation issue.今天我想讲的是节能问题。

7. How can we…? 我们怎样才能……?

How can we work more efficiently?

我们怎样才能工作得更有效率呢?

8.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for…我从心底感谢……

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.

我从心底感谢你们今天给了解这个机会在你们前面讲话。

9. So long as…只要……

So long as we work together we can achieve great results.

只要我们一起努力,我们就能取得巨大的成就

10. Working together… 一起努力…

Working together, we can make the future better.

一起努力,我们将把未来变得更加美好。

11. I should like to pay tribute to… 我想对……表示敬意

I should like to pay tribute to the dedication of all the professionals who worked on this project.

我想对参与这个项目的所有专家的奉献表示敬意。

12. I want to leave you with… 我想留给你们……

I want to leave you with one final word to remember, “teamwork”.

我想让你们记住最后一个词:“团队合作”。

13. We sincerely hope…我们衷心希望……

We sincerely hope that you will have a wonderful time tonight.

我们衷心希望你们今晚过的开心。

14. I look forward to… 我期待……

I look forward to seeing you again.

我期待着再次见到你们。

15. Best wishes for… 对……致以良好的祝愿

Best wishes for a very successful exhibition!

名师课堂:说说英语写作中的“套话”

2011-05-09来源:新浪博客

想写这篇文章,是因为在评改作文的时候,笔者总是看到一些考生在文章的开头使用“It goes without saying that ?”或“There’s no denying the fact that ?”等套话。还有一些考生使用更长、更复杂的套话,比如,仿照《独立宣言》的首句,写成:“We hold these truth to be self-

evident that ?”或者仿照简·奥斯丁在小说《傲慢与偏见》中的写法,写成:“It is a truth universally acknowledged that ?”笔者经常想,这种只占字数、不表达思想的句子在作文中出现,考官会怎么看?他们会觉得考生的写作水平高吗?考生当然也很无奈:要完成一篇250~300个词的英文文章,如果不写这些套话,要写够字数,还不能写得太简单,那都写什么呀?

看来,问题不在于该不该写这些套话,而在于如果不写套话,那么考生该用什么来取代它们,以使作文简练、流畅而不装腔作势。下面笔者列出几种套话写作的处理方法,和大家共享。

方法一:宁写一词、不写一句

这种方法主要用于替换引言套句。具体的办法是将主题句前面的“It goes without saying that ?”“There’s no denying the fact that?”等引言套句换成一个副词,直接引出主题句。比如,考生写一篇关于“互联网”的文章,一般都会习惯性地用引言套句引出主题句,写成:“It goes without saying that the Internet has offered people a way to

communicate.”(句子1)还有些担心字数不够的考生甚至把上述句子扩充为:“I’m quite certain that a growing of number of people, youngsters in particular, would agree that the Internet has offered people a way

to communicate.”坦率地讲,在最初用英文写作时,笔者也经常用这样的句子,而且每次用心中都会感到一种巨大的“成就感”。但你对英文写作熟悉了之后,就会慢慢发现,上述句子中的“I’m quite certain that a growing number of people, youngsters in particular, would agree that”(句子2)除了占用了你策划主题句的时间,实在没有什么实用价值。

相反,如果写作时不写这样的套句,而直接用副词引出主题句,则不光观点鲜明、结构简练,还能让考官一眼看到主题。以上句为例,我们不如干脆写成:“Undeniably, the Internet has offered people a way to

communicate.”(句子3)这岂不更为简练?所以,考生与其花时间去背诵和主题无关的引言,还不如把精力放在主题句本身的锤炼上,完善结构,增加修辞,把主题句写精致。比如上面的句子,我们可以进一步改写成:“Undeniably, the Internet has revolutionized the ways people communicate.”(句子4)大家可以对比一下句子2和句子4,显然句子4的结构和修辞更有英语(论坛)的韵味。

类似的替换写法很多,以下是一些常用的替换写法,大家可以参考:

1. “It is an indisputable fact that ?”换成“Undeniably, ?”

2. “We hold it truth to be self-evident that ?”换成

“Evidently, ?”

3. “There’s no denying the fact that ?”换成“Undeniably, ?”

4. “It is a well-known fact that ?”换成“Not surprisingly, ?”

5. “Even more worrying is the fact that ?”换成“Even more disturbingly, ?”

6. “It is obviously that ?”换成“Obviously, ?”

7. “It is vitally important tha”t换成“More importantly, ?”方法二:巧用结构,替换空话

诸如“with the development of our society”这样的句子可能是中国考生最爱写的一类套话了。考生通常会把这类套话安排在主题句的前面,美其名曰“先交代时代背景,再引出主题句”。这类套话还会衍生出无数“变种”,比较夸张的写法是:“Along with the dramatic economic growth and groundbreaking social and psychological displacement, there’s an

urgent demand that our country have more newspapers and magazines.”看过上千篇“范文”的考官一眼就能看出“Along with the dramatic economic growth and groundbreaking social and psychological

displacement, there’s an urgent demand that”是“凑字”的空话。

那么该如何替换这一类空话呢?其中一个办法是使用“??很重要,我们要重视”这样的句子形成主题句,然后对“??很重要,我们要重视”这个意思进行结构变换或修辞处理,使用词和结构更加多样化。下面用语法结构解析的方法来逐一分析“??很重要,我们要重视”的表达方式。

1. 用“主—系—表”结构表达。“主—系—表”结构是英语写作中最为基础的结构,它的基本结构是“名词+be (变形)+形容词”。在用该结构替换上文所述空洞无物的套话时,可以使用“not only +形容词, but also +形容词”结构,比如写成:“? is not only necessary, but also indispensable”,然后后面再补充一句:“and that’s why we are supposed to emphasize

its central position in our society.”这样就能成功将“随着社会的发展”这一空话替换下来。

2. 用“主—谓—宾”结构表达。上文中的句子还可以这样表达:“? plays a significant part in our society, so it is essential that its position be emphasized.”细心的考生可以发现,虽然是表达同一个意思,但“主—系—表”结构和“主—谓—宾”结构采用了不同的句子形式,这两种表达方式都直接、有效。

3. 用否定句和被动语态表达。否定句和被动语态结合起来使用能使表达更加多样,也更具客观性,如:“The central position of ? cannot be ignored. So we are expected to underscore its importance in our society.”

4. 用until正话反说或反话正说。可以用“? has been overlooked until recently. But ?”这一句型来为“??很重要,我们要重视”这个意思做铺垫,从而使句意表达更加生动,比如:“The importance of ? has been in large measure overlooked until recently. But nowadays, it is not only necessary, but also indispensable in our society. ”

5. 将“重视”和“重要”的顺序颠倒,先写“重视”,再写“重要”。比如:“We are supposed to emphasize its central position in our

society, because it is not only necessary, but also indispensable.”方法三:用好“数据论证”,学会没话找话

篇二:英文论文审稿常用套话

编辑一般会发给审稿人一个提纲,类似于这样的:

文章编号

题目

对文章一个概括性的描述及审稿人自己的决定(接受,拒,大修,小修等) 审稿意见:

1、XX

2、XX

3、XX

...

审稿意见的一些套话

1. This is a carefully done study and the findings are of considerable interest. A few minor revision are list below.

2. This is a well-written paper containing interesting results which merit publication. For the benefit of the reader, however, a number of points need clarifying and certain statements require further justification. There are given below.

3. Although these observation are interesting, they are rather limited and do not advance our knowledge of the subject sufficiently to warrant publication in PNAS. We suggest that the authors try submitting their findings to specialist journal such as –

4. Although this paper is good, it would be ever better if some extra data were added.

5. This manuscript is not suitable for publication in the journal of – because the main observation it describe was reported 3 years ago in a reputable journal of - .

6. Please ask someone familiar with English language to help you rewrite this paper. As you will see, I have made some correction at the beginning of the paper where some syntax is not satisfactory.

7. We feel that this potentially interesting study has been marred by an inability to communicate the finding correctly in English and should like to suggest that the authors seek the advice of someone with a good knowledge of English, preferable native speaker.

8. The wording and style of some section, particularly those concerning HPLC, need careful editing. Attention should be paid to the wording of those parts of the Discussion of and Summary which have been underlined.

9. Preliminary experiments only have been done and with exception of that summarized in Table 2, none has been repeated. This is clearly

unsatisfactory, particularly when there is so much variation between assays.

10. The condition of incubation are poorly defined. What is the temperature? Were antibody used?

篇三:2013届本科毕业论文答辩流程和答辩须知

外语系2013届毕业论文答辩流程及注意事项

一、自我介绍和论文要点陈述:

1、 自我介绍(英文,限时30秒以内);

2、 简要概述论文的主要内容(照念英文摘要者答辩成绩自动降档一级);

二、 回答答辩组老师提问:

1、三个必答的问题(答辩前30分钟由答辩组老师提供);

2、答辩过程中即兴提问;

三、答辩记录及成绩评定:

1、完整并正确填写表格中个人基本信息、论文题目(中文);

2、记录人、答辩地点和答辩组成员根据系里统一安排表上的信息在答辩当日填写;

3、答辩过程中,小组成员可互为书记员,但最后填写到表格上的答辩记录须由答辩组老师安排2名同学负责抄写,不可由答辩同学本人填写,即一组里的答辩记录最多只能有两个人的笔迹,违者,该生答辩成绩定为不合格。

4、,答辩小组评语:必须由答辩组长本人亲笔填写;评语必须针对论文的具体情况,从选题、结构、表达及答辩中的具体表现进行评述,切忌套话、空话和千篇一律的格式化表述。时间统一为:2013年6月1日。

5、系(部)毕业设计论文)评审工作领导小组意见有系里审核后统一填写,时间统一为:2013年6月6日。

四、定稿:答辩结束后,学生须根据答辩过程中老师指出的有关论文修改的意见对三稿进

wyxlwdg2013@sina.cn附件以所在组指

2013年6月8日;

六、定稿审定:收到学生的最后定稿后,系部将组织部分论文指导细心、要求严格的、有

的同学的名单,发布在各班的QQ群共享里,请注意及时查看,未合格学生须在6月8日参加二次答辩,再未合格者将永久性不合格,不能获得毕业证书和学位证书。

湘南学院外语系

2013年5月25日

论文定稿修改六大“天条”

一、 封面部分:

? ? 论文定稿完成时间统一为:2013年5月, 这个时间和封二的英文时间必须一致;

二、 封二部分:

英文标题格式:Times New Roman, 小三,加粗,除虚词外,每个实词的首字母要大写,如:

Translation of Personal Names in English Literary Works

? 封二部分的英文时间标记必须和封面一致,统一为:May 2013

三、 目录:

CONTENTS(Times New Roman, 小三, 加粗,居中),各章节目录对齐方式:分散对齐;

一级标题:五号,加粗,除句首单词的首字母和专有名词首字母要大写外,其他不用大写;

二级和三级标题五号字体,不要加粗,各自相对上一级标题缩进1.5各字符对齐,行距20磅;

四、摘要部分:摘要的关键词之间用分号隔开;

五、正文部分:

* 一级标题,比如:Introduction (Times New Roman、两端对齐[顶格对齐]、小三、加粗); 二级标题和三级标题相对一级标题缩进1.5个字符对齐,即与标题下的每一段落的第一句话句首对齐,比如:

Introduction

1. Translation studies on proverbs abroad

According to the recent research on the translation studies on proverbs...

1.1 Translation of proverbs from Chinese into English...

1.1.1 Translation of proverbs from English into Chinese in a foreignizing way

* Introduction和Conclusion前不要插入章节序号,比如,1. Introduction或5. Conclusion; * 正文部分所引用的文献必须在文后参考文献部分完整体现,并一一对应,文中文献的标记形式如下:(Newmark, 2001: 24),即作者姓名、文献的年份、页码,页码不一定每一个都要

六、参考文献:

* 文献排序原则:

英文文献在前,中文文献在后,

[1]、[2]...

?

? 文献标识分类:

1).[M]为著作或专著;如:

Newmark, Peter. A Textbook of Translation[M]. Shanghai: Shanghai Foreign Language Education Press,

2001.

2).[C]为论文集;

王承绪. 中国高等教育发展战略——中英高等教育学术讨论会论文集[C]. 南京:东南大学出版社, 2001.

如用的是论文集中的具体的一篇文献则用按以下格式:

Lakoff,G. The Contemporary Theory of Metaphor [A]. In Ortony. A. (ed). Metaphor and Thought (2nd edition)[C]. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1993.( [A]为Article的意思)

3). [N]为报纸文献,如:

贾辉. 谚语英汉互译趣谈[N]. 英语辅导报, 2008年4月.

4). [D]为学位论文;

5). [EB/OL]为电子文献,如:

王明亮. 关于中国学术期刊标准化数据库系统工

英语本科论文答辩套话

程的进展[EB/OL]. http:///pub/wml.txt/980810-2html, 1988-09-12.

6). [J]为期刊或杂志;如:

黄向前.英汉文学作品的人名寓意及翻译[J].湖南科技学院学报,2005,(2):138-139.

7). [Z]为各种未定义的文献类型,如:

严邦. 中国文化漫谈[Z]. 北京:外语教学与研究出版社,2002.

特别提醒

如果你在论文写作时,由于不细致,导致未标记文献标识,且已无从查找原始文献,提供一个判断的方法:著作文献[M],包括论文集[C]和各种未定义的文献[Z],其文献标识后面必须是一个出版地点,而期刊文献[J]后面只能是期刊的名称。此原则可帮助你判断你所引用的文献是什么。

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